Monday, 22 June 2020

My writing

This is my story about the dundonald ship wreak I never I would be in
picture this do a stranon on a deserted island and you have nothing but sealskin and feathers.
can only eat seals or Mollymookand you got crash Byways a few days ago and then you can't nearly died.

I was stranded on our deserted island and I had nowhere to sleep I was Shipwrecked a few days ago and I forgot I will where I was my arrival said I we were on disappointment Island but I didn't go with that but I was really disappointment because I Shipwrecked and we got stuck on it for a year.

me and my friend Rowan like we don't have any huts it's so so we made our own grass sticks and Mud Hut but we didn't think it would work and we had lots of canvases from the ship.all we had to eat was Mollymook grass Lee's some snail grubs and some other things like seal meat.

most of our fellow mate's head died at we were so sad about that they looked after it a lot captain and James someone died.I feel like I was a bit lonely for the last couple of days my friend rowan Comforted me.

I felt so free but also sad for my fellow mate I just really really wanted to go home but we didn't have any ships to go on.

few days later we made a small raft.

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