Today I turned fifteen years old. I got to fell the handel of a light saber. It had a leather handel and a blue light for the blade.
I was starting to join the Jedi army, I thought that it would be easy… but I was wrong. We had to Do one hundred push ups If we mucked up. I mucked up at least five times so that would be five hundred push ups in a day. Today we were doing hand to hand combat It was hard but really fun. I won most of the combats because I am fit,strong and flexible.
It was time for war and I had only five weeks of training out of ten weeks of training. But that was only because I went to earth for five weeks.
Its time for war now I hope I survive. I was thinking I should write a letter. (Dear Mum Dad and brothers
Please wish me luck and pray for me. We are about to fight count dooku and General Grievous it will be hard and dangerous.
But it's best for the family we need more money.)
...(Lots of love James)
Soldier’s to your position now!!! Shouted Mace Windu
He is the leader for the Jedi army.
It well be hard so I wish you luck!!! Shrouded Mace Windu
“Good bye and good luck fellow’s”
The End
By James la Trobe
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