Wednesday, 7 April 2021

My Nonsense Animal

 My Nonsense Animal


My nonsense animal that I made (Spike Fish)

Has Lots of spikes that are colossal (As big as the Eiffel tower) and so are as small as a mouse. There eyes are as big as a size seven basketball. He is a kind of fish...will mutant.


He eats other sea creatures like fish, clams, shrimp, eel, 

and chicken. Its favorite food is humans 

Its favorite color is red because it likes blood and death.


Its twelve thousand meters long and is the most dangerous fish and animal in the galaxy.

 Its fins are sharper than the sharpest thing in the galaxy.


So that is the end for now


James La Trobe


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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous7 April 2021 at 13:37

    Hello James!

    I really liked this piece of writing alot! what you could do next time is make the writing a little more descriptive.

    Again this is a perfect piece of writing and i loved the way you put a picture in my head! -Jai

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  2. Anonymous11 May 2021 at 12:15

    monke

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