Zoos have been around for a very long time.
Zoos help animals from poachers and hunters.
Fun fact: The real name for zoos are Zoological Park.
I strongly believe that zoos are very very good.
Firstly, I think that because they bring people and animals together.
Secondly. zoos also help to protect endangered species by bringing them to a safe and friendly environment. Where they are protected from poachers,habitat loss, starvation, and predators.
Secondly, the substantially increases their population, and it protects them from hunters, poacher and other animals.
Thirdly, they provide them enough food, space, water, and exercise to last them.
My conclusion is that they provide children and Adults learning.
So I believe that zoos are very very GOOD.
By James L.T
Kia Ora James, your strength in this piece of persuasive writing is your structure. You have included an introduction and conclusion, and have used firstly, secondly and thirdly to introduce your arguments. What are some synonyms you could use aside from 'very very good', perhaps exceptionally good or beneficial? In your conclusion, you can sum up your arguments and give your readers a command/ recommendation, e.g. All countries must support zoos for their conservation efforts.
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