I really enjoyed seeing your pie chart! I can see that sports and family time is very important to you! You seem to spend a lot of time on chores too.
Your character creation is very neat! Did you use tinker cad to draw it?
Your creeper poem gave me goosebumps! It sounds very menacing. You've used some interesting verbs here, such as summon, terrorize, adapt. I wonder if we could add some poetic techniques we learned this week:
Simile: I would make sand blocks tumble like a landslide. Alliteration: I would terrify and the tiny townspeople.
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Hi James
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed seeing your pie chart! I can see that sports and family time is very important to you! You seem to spend a lot of time on chores too.
Your character creation is very neat! Did you use tinker cad to draw it?
Your creeper poem gave me goosebumps! It sounds very menacing. You've used some interesting verbs here, such as summon, terrorize, adapt. I wonder if we could add some poetic techniques we learned this week:
Simile: I would make sand blocks tumble like a landslide.
Alliteration: I would terrify and the tiny townspeople.