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“Hi Dad” said James. “Look what I've made. It's a saddle. I don’t know why I made it”. 

“It looks great son,” said Dad.

“Can we go to the park now Dad?” said James. 

“Yes sure son. Which park son?” said Dad.

 “Uumm… well can we go into the city?” said James. “Ahh... ok son let's hop into my van” said Dad. 

“Yeah this is going to be fun” said James. 

Three hours later James said “I'm hungry. Can we have something to eat?”

 “Ok, what do you want?”

 “Can we have subway? said James.

”Five minutes later. 

“Hey where's the subway shop dad? It should be right …” But, he didn’t have time to finish his sentence. There was a colossal roar. It made the floor shake.

 “Hey Dad! That’s a Death song from How to train your...It's going to pick up the car...we are already in the air now and…” Crash!!! The Deathsong had just dropped the car. 

“Let us get out of the car Dad. I did bring the saddle. The Deathsong is just lonely, Dad,” said James.

 Dad said “How do you know that?” 

“Well look at that. There are so many things and there is the Deathsong now. Look there's a fish.” So James ran over to the fish and picked it up. 

Then the Deathsong came up to him and James gave him the fish. The Deathsong ate the fish like a pickle on a stick. James put his hand out to the Deathsong’s head.  Do you know what? The Deathsong put his head onto James's hand.

 “I’m going to call you Striker” said James.

 “Rrrrr,” the Deathsong said.

Chapter Two

Then suddenly there came a distress call from a female Deathsong, so James put the saddle on and said, “Bye Dad. See you soon.”

Then Striker took off up into the air with James and flew to where the female Deathsong was. Suddenly, a titan monstrous nightmare came ZOOMING past. Then, we saw the whole thing. The female Deathsong had eggs. I bet that the titan monstrous nightmare was going for the eggs to destroy them.

Chapter Three

James and Striker came to the rescue to save the eggs. James jumped off Striker and dive rolled onto the ground.

Then he started shouting, “Go Striker go go go” Then the monstrous nightmare bit Striker’s neck and blood started pouring out of his wounded neck.

Chapter Four

James was so ferocious that he looked at the Monstrous Nightmare and shouted “YOU’RE DEAD.” He then grabbed a sword and stabbed the Monstrous Nightmare’s neck and ran to finish him off. But, it just took off.

Ten minutes later he was bandaging up Striker's neck. When he had finished, the eggs started to hatch. “They are cute,” said James.

The end by James La Trobe          (Link)