Hi James, Have you been reading about Bear Grylls? I've read one of his books and watched a few of his shows - he is really inspiring.
I really enjoyed the parts of your writing where I could hear your own voice - the parts that came from you mind. Perhaps next time think about how you can make the whole thing in your own words so it sounds like it comes from you.
It is always so great to see how much energy you put into kapa haka. Tino pai.
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Hi James, hope you can see my comments on your slides:)
ReplyDeleteHi James,
ReplyDeleteHave you been reading about Bear Grylls? I've read one of his books and watched a few of his shows - he is really inspiring.
I really enjoyed the parts of your writing where I could hear your own voice - the parts that came from you mind. Perhaps next time think about how you can make the whole thing in your own words so it sounds like it comes from you.
It is always so great to see how much energy you put into kapa haka. Tino pai.